Borderlands Story: Jezebel (Character)

So I had been reluctant to post this because there's a mass amount of different ideas being tossed around and - well, we're our own worst critic right?

A couple friend read it, and encouraged I posted it here. The character idea was submitted to Gearbox a couple weeks ago, but I got so into writing the history that it's now quite long and wanted to share it with people.

This is a RAW version of the story and needs a lot of work still so please be constructive if you're going to leave any feedback.

Borderlands Story: Jezebel's Beginning

This is. Chapter 1 if it had chapters. I'll post more links as I upload more. There may be echo recordings uploaded as well, and you'll notice in the story that planets remain pretty well unnamed as there's not a lot of information on other planets or galaxies in Borderlands.

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Thanks and enjoy!

EDIT: Okay found a site that doesn't block people from reading it (I hope). Also want to note I'd been writing this since mid-August.

ALSO the character starts out young in the story, but gets older as it progresses. I'll post a profile of her once it's completed.