Novice writer, The Izaya, here. I loved writing stories but my writing was mediocre at best. Passing through highschool and heading off into college, I've been striving to improve my writing in general (essays and stuff). I really wanted to get this out.
It'd be nice to to get some feedback on where I can improve so far. As I said, I'm a novice so it would be a nice learning experience to get feedback. As I further into my studies in school, I will surely show improvements as I continue to write.
Crimson Academy: Soldiers to be or Soldiers to Die
Only the prologue is available but I will add chapters as I work on them.
This story is more of a spin-off so non-canon (except for Handsome Jack and The Warrior mention). Some characters from the games will be mentioned but they won't be actual characters.
It'd be nice to to get some feedback on where I can improve so far. As I said, I'm a novice so it would be a nice learning experience to get feedback. As I further into my studies in school, I will surely show improvements as I continue to write.
Crimson Academy: Soldiers to be or Soldiers to Die
Only the prologue is available but I will add chapters as I work on them.
This story is more of a spin-off so non-canon (except for Handsome Jack and The Warrior mention). Some characters from the games will be mentioned but they won't be actual characters.