MADAME MALIWAN'S JUDICIAL JAILBREAK
This is an idea I had for the DLC. It still needs some work, but I'm gonna try and work on. Like BGH, it's lowest scale is 35. It takes place six months after Jack's downfall, and, like all the other DLCs, it starts when you fast travel to the new location The Web.
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Plot:
Intro
It starts when the Vault Hunter fast travels to The Web and the introductory cutscene plays. In it, Mister Blake (I know he doesn't work for Maliwan, but I'll explain later) starts to narrate an add for Maliwan which shows some off the new guns, before being cut off by a huge, black silhouette. It says This city's mine now, ************ The camera turns around, and it's Mister Tourge. He shouts at everyone on Pandora to come down to Maliwu (Thanks to Fhwk for the name) and raid Maliwan's armory. Blake comes back and says something along the lines ofIf you come down here, the full forces of Maliwan's power WILL be used.
Chapter 1
Now, with the introduction over, the Vault Hunter gets an Echo from Lilith/Mordeaci welcoming them to The Web, and saying he/she needs help. The Vault Hunter then runs across a bridge while they watch Lilith/Mordaeci fighting Maliwan Scienctists (see enemies section for more details on the scientists). The vault hunters join the fray and take out the MS, then are given the objective to talk to Lilith/Mordaeci. He/she starts to thank him, when suddenly, there is a lound bang. Greenish blood (It's green because it was a corrosive gun that shot them) squirts out of Lilith/Mord's chest, and they drop foward to reveal the shooter:Madame Maliwan. She is introduced, then says something like Vault Hunter? Now Why would you go and shoot an innocent man/woman and dozens of Hyperion Personel? I can assure that you will face the full extent of the law for this. Guards, come and escort this murderer to the prison. The Vault Hunter follows the two guards and MM into The Stew.
Chapter 2
Once the stew is entered, the quest for chapter one is turned in, and chapter two begins. The vault hunter follow Madame Maliwan and the two guards down a small hall. They approach a guard who is behind bars. He says We need your guns, cloths, and other possessions. The option to give items is now avalible when looking at the guard. When the player presses [X] (I don't know the PC and Playstation buttons) Mr. Blake comes on a loudspeaker. He asks for the vault hunter, who is then escorted down a small hallway on the east (The door to the jail is on the North, and the guard is to the west. You came from the South). The Vault Hunter will arrive in Blake's office, and he is introduced. He then says you're probably wondering why I'm working for Maliwan. Let me tell you, I have a plan. Ever since Jack's downfall, Hyperion has been in serious, (pause) 'troubles.' Fortunately, ever problem has a solution: Keep your friends close, and hire someone to murder your enimies. So, vault hunter, what do you say? Do you want to help with this (pause) problem? (He pauses) Now that that's settled, let's get down to business. I have an informant on the inside who helped me with Claptrap a few years ago. Get into The Stew, and talk to him. I should warn you though, he has some 'security' from his fellow inmates. The VH is now escorted out of the room and back to the room in the beginning, with the guard in it. Then they go into the main cell area, and make their way to the opposite side off the large room. There, they find a large cell on the top floor (There are three rows of cells). They step in, and are immediately attacked by 8 inmates (See Enemies section for more info. The VH takes them out, and Brick appears. He is introduced, and the quest can be turned in.
Chapter 3
Once Brick is introduced and the quest is turned in, Brick will stop talking. He says Slab? Maliwan got you to? Son of a *****. Now we only got two men watching Sancuary. (He pauses and sits down on his bed) Slab, why you in here anyways. (He pauses) Mord/Lilith? Maliwan got them? Oh ********, Slab! I can't take this! WE'RE NOT LETTING 'EM GET AWAY WITH THIS! (He does that thing where he starts shouting then slows down and breaths) (He pauses) Leave, Slab. Gimme some time. The VH leaves, and is left to explore the Cells. After a minute, the VH can return to Brick, who says Aight Slab, I'm good now. Blake sent you, right? He told you I was working for him? I'm not. I'm never working working for a Hyperion *******. Still, I got a sweet deal going with him: I dig a tunnel into The Palace, he let's me do whatever I want. Course, I ain't digging into the palace, I'm digging for a way out. So, Slab, you with me?(He pauses) Aight then. We gotta get into the UnderBurrows, there a string of caves under the stew. Then, a little bit a digging, and we're out. The only problem is that the only inmate with a key to the Burrows is this ex-slab Rocko. Talk to him. The Vault Hunter can now leave Brick's cell, and then make their way to Rocko. While they're walking to him, Brick comes on the Echo and says This guy, Rocko? He's a total *****. Kicked him out of the Slabs when he tried to overthrow me. Still, if you need something in this jail, he's got it. The VH should be at Rocko by now. He gets introduced, then says You need this key? 20 scaps. Brick comes on the ECHO, saying Rocko, just give us the key. Rocko replies 20 Scaps, or no deal. Brick replies Fine. Slab, go back to Blake, tell him you met me. I'll think of a way to get some Scaps. The VH can now return to Blake through a secret Murtus filledhole in his/her cell. When they make it back to Blake's office, he says Vault Hunter, tell me what you know quickly. We have a most unexpected guest.
That's all I've got for now. I'll try and add the next chapter or two tomorrow, and the plot should be done by the weekend. My plan now is that you meet Mister Blake, the warden, and Brick, the king of the prisoners, in the next quest. Mister Tourge is also gonna come in soon, and I'm thinking that their might be another quest-giving inmate (Rocko?) that comes in later. Still, I'm gonna keep working on this, and all feedback is appreciated
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Areas: The Web- A small, circular, futuristic map with a city in the background. There is a bridge in the northern end with a fast travel station, vending machine, and quick change station. The center off the map, which is the only named area (I'm thinking Circle of Progress is where the opening fight takes place. There might also be a boss fight towards the end of the storyline here). There's plenty of cover around the edges, and in the center is a huge, platinum statue of Madame Maliwan. There are two map exits: The Stew in the Southeast and Madame's Palace in the west.
The Stew- This is going to be the jail. I don't have it entirely worked out yet; All I really know is that the office areas will be futuristic and shiny, while the actual cells where the inmates are will be trashy, old, and grey. The cells need to have enough cover since one quest encloses a full blown riot there. There are three introduced NPCs (Brick, Mr. Blake, and another inmate), and dozens of other unnamed inmates. There are vending machines and a fast-travel station somewhere, probably Brick's cell or Blake's office. Their are three map exits: The Web, The Underburrow, and Murtus Caverns
The Underburrow- A long, dark cave filled with Murtus and Lanurus. It has two map exits: The Stew on the Southwest and Madame's Palaceon the east. There is a fast travel station and some vending machines here. It can't be assessed until after the storyline quest Riots, Explosives, and You. It is pretty straight foward, with two paths to take that lead up to an arena before the Palace[/I] entrance. The Arena itself is like Duniko's Mom's where it has many breakable cover spots. I still need to work on this a lot, since I still have no idea what's gonna go before the fight (It's against a slagged Lanurus).
Murtus Caverns- More on this soon. A main boss fight will be here, against a giant Murtus.
Madame's Palace- More on this soon
There will be at least to more maps that I will work on and have them up soon.
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Quests: Coming soon
There is definitely gonna be a quest called Riots, Explosives, and You towards the middle of the storyline. Other than that, I don't know.
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Side Quests:
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NPCs: Mister Blake
Mister Tourge
Madame Maliwan
Brick
Rocko
Marcus (Echo only)
Claptrap (Echo only)
Sir Hammerlock (Echo only)
Scooter (Echo only)
Inmates
Gaurds
I will have more on this, like introductions, appearance, and voice, up soon.
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Enemies: Murtus- A rat-type creature
Maliwan Scientists
Lanurus- A frog-type creature
Maliwan Mutant
Maliwan Gaurd
Inmate
More coming soon
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Mini Bosses: The Lanurus Boss at the end of the Underburrow might be a mini boss.
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Main Bosses: There are gonna be there to five main bosses. There's definitely going to be a Murtus Boss in Murtus Caverns, and a Lanurus Boss at the end of the Underburrow. There's gonna be some type of fight against Madame Maliwan, and then another big fight at the end. There's not really room for another one anywhere, but if I find room, they'll be another.
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Optional Bosses: Coming Soon
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Raid Bosses: Unamed Robot Raid Boss
Unamed Murtus Raid Boss
Unamed Maliwan Mutant Raid Boss
There will be more on this soon. I really think something like RSRB would be great for the robot though.
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Loot: There's gonna be a new rarity: Red. There's only 6 red rarity guns in the game, and you only get 1 a play through. The red rarities are a quest reward from the last quest. Depending on who you turn the mission into, you get:
A Maliwan Shotgun (Claptrap)
A Jakob's Launcher (Marcus)
A Tourge SMG (Mister Tourge)
An Atlas Sniper (Brick)
A Hyperion Asault Rifle (Blake)
Depending on who you turn the quest into, you get one of these guns. I know none of these companies make these guns; that's the point.
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I'm looking for ideas with Raid Bosses and the title the most (I can't stand Judicial in the title, but the only other word I could think of was juicy,and that doesn't really work). Sorry their's so little now, but I'll add new things every day.
Thanks for reading, and I hope you like my idea. I will be changing, adding, and deleting things, so any feedback is greatly appreciated.
This is an idea I had for the DLC. It still needs some work, but I'm gonna try and work on. Like BGH, it's lowest scale is 35. It takes place six months after Jack's downfall, and, like all the other DLCs, it starts when you fast travel to the new location The Web.
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Plot:
Intro
It starts when the Vault Hunter fast travels to The Web and the introductory cutscene plays. In it, Mister Blake (I know he doesn't work for Maliwan, but I'll explain later) starts to narrate an add for Maliwan which shows some off the new guns, before being cut off by a huge, black silhouette. It says This city's mine now, ************ The camera turns around, and it's Mister Tourge. He shouts at everyone on Pandora to come down to Maliwu (Thanks to Fhwk for the name) and raid Maliwan's armory. Blake comes back and says something along the lines ofIf you come down here, the full forces of Maliwan's power WILL be used.
Chapter 1
Now, with the introduction over, the Vault Hunter gets an Echo from Lilith/Mordeaci welcoming them to The Web, and saying he/she needs help. The Vault Hunter then runs across a bridge while they watch Lilith/Mordaeci fighting Maliwan Scienctists (see enemies section for more details on the scientists). The vault hunters join the fray and take out the MS, then are given the objective to talk to Lilith/Mordaeci. He/she starts to thank him, when suddenly, there is a lound bang. Greenish blood (It's green because it was a corrosive gun that shot them) squirts out of Lilith/Mord's chest, and they drop foward to reveal the shooter:Madame Maliwan. She is introduced, then says something like Vault Hunter? Now Why would you go and shoot an innocent man/woman and dozens of Hyperion Personel? I can assure that you will face the full extent of the law for this. Guards, come and escort this murderer to the prison. The Vault Hunter follows the two guards and MM into The Stew.
Chapter 2
Once the stew is entered, the quest for chapter one is turned in, and chapter two begins. The vault hunter follow Madame Maliwan and the two guards down a small hall. They approach a guard who is behind bars. He says We need your guns, cloths, and other possessions. The option to give items is now avalible when looking at the guard. When the player presses [X] (I don't know the PC and Playstation buttons) Mr. Blake comes on a loudspeaker. He asks for the vault hunter, who is then escorted down a small hallway on the east (The door to the jail is on the North, and the guard is to the west. You came from the South). The Vault Hunter will arrive in Blake's office, and he is introduced. He then says you're probably wondering why I'm working for Maliwan. Let me tell you, I have a plan. Ever since Jack's downfall, Hyperion has been in serious, (pause) 'troubles.' Fortunately, ever problem has a solution: Keep your friends close, and hire someone to murder your enimies. So, vault hunter, what do you say? Do you want to help with this (pause) problem? (He pauses) Now that that's settled, let's get down to business. I have an informant on the inside who helped me with Claptrap a few years ago. Get into The Stew, and talk to him. I should warn you though, he has some 'security' from his fellow inmates. The VH is now escorted out of the room and back to the room in the beginning, with the guard in it. Then they go into the main cell area, and make their way to the opposite side off the large room. There, they find a large cell on the top floor (There are three rows of cells). They step in, and are immediately attacked by 8 inmates (See Enemies section for more info. The VH takes them out, and Brick appears. He is introduced, and the quest can be turned in.
Chapter 3
Once Brick is introduced and the quest is turned in, Brick will stop talking. He says Slab? Maliwan got you to? Son of a *****. Now we only got two men watching Sancuary. (He pauses and sits down on his bed) Slab, why you in here anyways. (He pauses) Mord/Lilith? Maliwan got them? Oh ********, Slab! I can't take this! WE'RE NOT LETTING 'EM GET AWAY WITH THIS! (He does that thing where he starts shouting then slows down and breaths) (He pauses) Leave, Slab. Gimme some time. The VH leaves, and is left to explore the Cells. After a minute, the VH can return to Brick, who says Aight Slab, I'm good now. Blake sent you, right? He told you I was working for him? I'm not. I'm never working working for a Hyperion *******. Still, I got a sweet deal going with him: I dig a tunnel into The Palace, he let's me do whatever I want. Course, I ain't digging into the palace, I'm digging for a way out. So, Slab, you with me?(He pauses) Aight then. We gotta get into the UnderBurrows, there a string of caves under the stew. Then, a little bit a digging, and we're out. The only problem is that the only inmate with a key to the Burrows is this ex-slab Rocko. Talk to him. The Vault Hunter can now leave Brick's cell, and then make their way to Rocko. While they're walking to him, Brick comes on the Echo and says This guy, Rocko? He's a total *****. Kicked him out of the Slabs when he tried to overthrow me. Still, if you need something in this jail, he's got it. The VH should be at Rocko by now. He gets introduced, then says You need this key? 20 scaps. Brick comes on the ECHO, saying Rocko, just give us the key. Rocko replies 20 Scaps, or no deal. Brick replies Fine. Slab, go back to Blake, tell him you met me. I'll think of a way to get some Scaps. The VH can now return to Blake through a secret Murtus filledhole in his/her cell. When they make it back to Blake's office, he says Vault Hunter, tell me what you know quickly. We have a most unexpected guest.
That's all I've got for now. I'll try and add the next chapter or two tomorrow, and the plot should be done by the weekend. My plan now is that you meet Mister Blake, the warden, and Brick, the king of the prisoners, in the next quest. Mister Tourge is also gonna come in soon, and I'm thinking that their might be another quest-giving inmate (Rocko?) that comes in later. Still, I'm gonna keep working on this, and all feedback is appreciated
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Areas: The Web- A small, circular, futuristic map with a city in the background. There is a bridge in the northern end with a fast travel station, vending machine, and quick change station. The center off the map, which is the only named area (I'm thinking Circle of Progress is where the opening fight takes place. There might also be a boss fight towards the end of the storyline here). There's plenty of cover around the edges, and in the center is a huge, platinum statue of Madame Maliwan. There are two map exits: The Stew in the Southeast and Madame's Palace in the west.
The Stew- This is going to be the jail. I don't have it entirely worked out yet; All I really know is that the office areas will be futuristic and shiny, while the actual cells where the inmates are will be trashy, old, and grey. The cells need to have enough cover since one quest encloses a full blown riot there. There are three introduced NPCs (Brick, Mr. Blake, and another inmate), and dozens of other unnamed inmates. There are vending machines and a fast-travel station somewhere, probably Brick's cell or Blake's office. Their are three map exits: The Web, The Underburrow, and Murtus Caverns
The Underburrow- A long, dark cave filled with Murtus and Lanurus. It has two map exits: The Stew on the Southwest and Madame's Palaceon the east. There is a fast travel station and some vending machines here. It can't be assessed until after the storyline quest Riots, Explosives, and You. It is pretty straight foward, with two paths to take that lead up to an arena before the Palace[/I] entrance. The Arena itself is like Duniko's Mom's where it has many breakable cover spots. I still need to work on this a lot, since I still have no idea what's gonna go before the fight (It's against a slagged Lanurus).
Murtus Caverns- More on this soon. A main boss fight will be here, against a giant Murtus.
Madame's Palace- More on this soon
There will be at least to more maps that I will work on and have them up soon.
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Quests: Coming soon
There is definitely gonna be a quest called Riots, Explosives, and You towards the middle of the storyline. Other than that, I don't know.
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Side Quests:
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NPCs: Mister Blake
Mister Tourge
Madame Maliwan
Brick
Rocko
Marcus (Echo only)
Claptrap (Echo only)
Sir Hammerlock (Echo only)
Scooter (Echo only)
Inmates
Gaurds
I will have more on this, like introductions, appearance, and voice, up soon.
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Enemies: Murtus- A rat-type creature
Maliwan Scientists
Lanurus- A frog-type creature
Maliwan Mutant
Maliwan Gaurd
Inmate
More coming soon
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Mini Bosses: The Lanurus Boss at the end of the Underburrow might be a mini boss.
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Main Bosses: There are gonna be there to five main bosses. There's definitely going to be a Murtus Boss in Murtus Caverns, and a Lanurus Boss at the end of the Underburrow. There's gonna be some type of fight against Madame Maliwan, and then another big fight at the end. There's not really room for another one anywhere, but if I find room, they'll be another.
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Optional Bosses: Coming Soon
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Raid Bosses: Unamed Robot Raid Boss
Unamed Murtus Raid Boss
Unamed Maliwan Mutant Raid Boss
There will be more on this soon. I really think something like RSRB would be great for the robot though.
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Loot: There's gonna be a new rarity: Red. There's only 6 red rarity guns in the game, and you only get 1 a play through. The red rarities are a quest reward from the last quest. Depending on who you turn the mission into, you get:
A Maliwan Shotgun (Claptrap)
A Jakob's Launcher (Marcus)
A Tourge SMG (Mister Tourge)
An Atlas Sniper (Brick)
A Hyperion Asault Rifle (Blake)
Depending on who you turn the quest into, you get one of these guns. I know none of these companies make these guns; that's the point.
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I'm looking for ideas with Raid Bosses and the title the most (I can't stand Judicial in the title, but the only other word I could think of was juicy,and that doesn't really work). Sorry their's so little now, but I'll add new things every day.
Thanks for reading, and I hope you like my idea. I will be changing, adding, and deleting things, so any feedback is greatly appreciated.